#写作中的中式英语（介绍钓鱼的经验英语作文#梁师亦友聊英语# 第827期 --- 写作中如何克服“中文式”英语嵌入（上）)
书面表达瓶颈之一
克服“中文式英语”的嵌入
很多高三同学在面对高考难度与要求的书面表达的时候，显得捉襟见肘，觉得自己写的文章很好，为什么不能得高分呢？我也曾经看到过这样的作文，它们都有个共同点就是：有中文式英语的嵌入。我们讲中文式英语，不是像我们所说的纯的中文式英语，即按照中文的句子结构，一字一字的翻译。而我在这里所表达的中文式英语的嵌入，是我们同学们在平时写作文时没有使用固定的句型，到考试现场现编是不可能突破书面表达这个瓶颈的。那么如何去克服中文式英语的嵌入呢？
多年的高中英语教学经验告诉我，高分作文，即20分以上的作文，除了具备能带来视觉美感享受的优美的书法、能体现考生深厚语言功底的高级词汇、复合句和非谓语动词等特点外，一定少不了起到画龙点睛、妙笔生画作文的经典句型。
大家都知道写作提分的三要素有句型、连词和高级词汇，那么句子是我们写作文最大的单位。有了漂亮的句子，用好的连词将其连句成段，再加上一些如星星般亮点的词汇的点缀，一篇好的高考英语作文就有了。而这三个要素中最容易把握的就是句子，所以希望大家能够将写作的重心放在句型上，因为这个是最容易把握的。
一般来说，在一篇100个词左右的书面表达中，我们不提倡缘木求鱼、画蛇添足式的复杂结构和套句。但数量适中，运用恰当和内容有机结合的经典的句型往往有事半功倍的效果，也会让阅卷老师对于我们的书面表达刮目相看。所以我们讲使用好正确或者高级的句型，在高考英语写作中至关重要的。
【话题一：个人情况】
1.To tell the truth, I was not so good at my study when I came to high school.说实话，当我刚进入高中的时候，我学习不太好。
2．It is a great honor for me to be here to share my experience in college with you all.能和大家一起分享我在大学的经历，我感到很荣幸。
3．Recently, Ive been so occupied with an important exam at the beginning of the new term that I failed to reply to your letter in time.最近我忙于新学期初的一次重要考试，所以我没有及时给你回信。
4．I am particularly good at spoken English and have a deep understanding of the cultures of our city and our country, which will greatly help me do the job. 我尤其擅长英语口语并且我对我市和我们国家的文化了解透彻，这将对我做这项工作很有帮助。
5．Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and how to share my experience with them. 就我个人而言，我喜欢在团队中工作，这给我提供了一个机会来学习如何与他人相处，如何与他们分享我的经验。
6．Im writing in reply to the notice for a volunteer, hoping that I may have an opportunity to act as a tour guide.我正写信回复招聘一名志愿者的启事，希望我有机会担任导游。
7．If you feel that I am qualified for the job, please inform me of the time of an interview at your convenience. I hope to hear from you in the near future. 如果您认为我适合该项工作，请您在方便的时候通知我面试的时间。我希望在不久的将来能收到您的来信。
8．To be honest, I have a gift for communicating with others.说实话，我有与别人沟通的天赋。
9．I am easygoing and outgoing and able to get on well with others.我很随和、外向，能够和别人友好相处。
10．Meanwhile, it is my independence that makes it easy for me to adapt to a new environment.同时，正是我的独立性使我很容易适应新的环境。
11．Not only am I outgoing and energetic but also I am optimistic and enthusiastic.我不仅开朗活泼，而且乐观热情。
12．I manage my time well , so I can always get things done on time.我时间安排得很好，因此总是能按时完成工作。
13．I have a good command of English, which enables me to communicate with foreign friends well.我精通英语，这使我能与外国朋友顺利交流。
14．I have strong team spirit and like to work with others.我有较强的团队精神，喜欢和别人一起工作。
15．As for my hobby, Im keen on playing football, which makes it possible for me to make more friends with the same interest.至于我的爱好，我酷爱踢足球，那使我能够结交更多的志趣相投的朋友。
16．What satisfies me most is that I have no difficulty communicating with others in English.最使我满意的是我用英语和别人交流起来毫不费力。
17．Last but not least, I am familiar with all the places in our city.最后但同样重要的是，我对我们城市所有的地方都很熟悉。
18．Above all, I promise I will try to serve our guests from all over the world with enthusiasm. Besides, I have a rich knowledge of Chinese history, so I can introduce our splendid culture to them. 最重要的是，我承诺我将热情地为来自世界各地的游客服务。此外，我非常了解中国历史，因此我能向他们介绍我们灿烂的文化。
19．It has become such an important part in my life that I can hardly imagine what life would be like without music.它(音乐)已成为我生命中重要的一部分。真的很难想象，如果没有音乐(我的)生活将会怎样。
20．Never for a moment can I stop my love for reading because books are wise teachers as well as good friends in my life.我对书的热爱一刻也不能停止，因为在我的生活中书是良师益友。
【话题二：日常活动】
21.Furthermore, I also actively participate in community activities and volunteer service activities.此外，我还积极参加社区活动和志愿者服务活动。
22．In addition, it does benefit you if you participate in a variety of afterschool activities.此外，参加各种课外活动对你确实有益处。
23．At the fair, related books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through which visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture much better but definitely feel the unique beauty of it.在展览会上，相关书籍、图片、录像带、实物将被展示，通过这些游客不仅能更好地理解中国的传统文化而且一定能感受到其独特的美。
24．Its strange that fishing isnt as easy to learn as it seems.很奇怪的是钓鱼不像看起来那样容易。
25．No sooner had I reached home than it began to rain.我刚到家就开始下雨了。
26．As scheduled, we have an English Talent Show today, with the purpose of developing our interest in English learning and improving our practical abilities to listen and speak.按照计划，我们今天举办英语才艺大赛，目的是培养我们英语学习的兴趣，提高我们实际听说的能力。
27．To help you have a better understanding of Chinese culture, the Students Union will organize a New Years party.为了帮助你们更好地理解中国文化，学生会将组织一场新年晚会。
28．Everyone is supposed to be in Room 120, the big classroom, exactly at 2：30 p．m., Monday.周一下午两点半大家必须在大教室120房间集合。
29．We feel it an honor to have an opportunity to get together with Mr Jones.能有机会与琼斯先生欢聚一堂，我们深感荣幸。
30．I will try to make the club known to every student and make more students involved in the activities organized by the club.我将尽力让每个学生了解社团，让更多的学生参与社团组织的活动。
31．Last week, our school carried out a survey among all the students, aiming to find out their opinions about setting up an English Corner.上周，为了了解学生对建立英语角的看法，我们学校在所有学生中做了一项调查。
32．On hearing the news/Hardly had they got the news when some of my classmates signed up for it in groups immediately.我们班一些同学一听到消息，就马上分小组报名参加。
33．Through this activity, not only did we pass our love and friendship to others, but we also enriched our own school life.通过这次活动，我们不仅给别人传递了爱和友谊，还丰富了我们自己的学校生活。
34．It is an interesting and meaningful activity. When we are tired of studying, we can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature, breathe fresh air and relax ourselves.这是一项有趣且有意义的活动。当我们学习累了，我们可以去一个美丽的地方欣赏大自然的美。呼吸新鲜空气、放松自我。
35．Not only can this activity improve my sense of responsibility, but it also educates me to cherish todays happy life.这次活动不仅提高了我的责任感而且教育我要珍惜今天的幸福生活。
36．I was wondering whether to participate when my English teacher came by, telling me that it was a good chance to display my talent.我正在想是否参加，这时英语老师走了过来，告诉我这是展示我才华的好机会。
37．Only then did I realize that it was by getting involved in the competition that I gained more selfconfidence and enjoyed the pleasure of teamwork.只有在那时我才意识到，正是通过参与比赛，我才获得了更多的自信，享受到了合作的乐趣。
38．Through this activity I realize that small things can make a big difference. I will spare no effort to help those in need.通过这次活动我认识到，事情虽小意义非凡。我会不遗余力地帮助需要帮助的人。
39．It was this activity that brought me pleasure and a sense of achievement.正是这次活动给我带来了快乐和成就感。
40．A wide variety of afterschool activities will broaden our horizons, enrich the school life and make us relaxed.丰富多彩的课外活动能够让我们开阔眼界，充实学校生活，还能使我们得到放松。
41．With cheers and applause like thunder, I was awarded the first prize.在雷鸣般的欢呼声和掌声中，我被授予一等奖。
42．When I accepted the prize on the stage, excitement and pride flooded over me all of a sudden.当我在台上领奖的时候，我突然感到兴奋和骄傲。
43．Before we left the centre, we had a photo taken to record the unforgettable experience, which gave us a good chance to build up courage and improve our sense of teamwork.离开中心之前，我们拍照记录这难忘的经历，这给我们一次增加勇气、增强团队合作意识的好机会。
44．A lecture about American culture was given last week by our foreign teacher, which appealed to lots of teachers and students.上周我们外教做了一个关于美国文化的讲座，吸引了很多老师和学生。
45．One of the activities is the English Corner every other week, aiming to improve our spoken English, as well as help us make a lot of friends.其中一项活动是隔周一次的英语角，目的是提高我们的英语口语，同时帮助我们广交朋友。
46．With my vivid introduction to the Silk Road, those cold historical facts seemed to become alive like a picture of fine art, attracting the audience so much.由于我对丝绸之路的生动讲解，那些冰冷的历史事实似乎变成了栩栩如生的好看的艺术画卷，深深吸引了听众。
【话题三：学校生活】
47.The final examination is coming up soon. It is time for us to get down to our studies.期末考试不久就要来了，我们该开始认真学习了。
48．The happy time always passed quickly! Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to our school.快乐时光总是过得很快！不知不觉，我们就要和学校说再见了。
49．It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things.依我之见，学生应该把学习、健康和安全放在首位。
50．Studying all day without taking exercise is going to drive me crazy.整天学习而不锻炼会让我发疯的。
51．Youd better make good use of time in class.在课堂上你最好充分利用时间。
52．When facing difficulties, I have enough courage to get them over.面对困难时，我有足够的勇气克服它们。
53．I do hope that I could be elected monitor of our class.我的确希望我能被选为我们班的班长。
54．In order to enhance the personal qualities, I actively get involved various activities to increase my experience, which I believe will play an important role in dealing with coming problems.为了提高个人能力，我积极参加各种活动，积累经验。我相信这对处理今后的问题起着重要作用。
55．As for me, I often go online to search some useful information for my study, because I hold the view that we should make the best of the Internet to equip ourselves with more knowledge.至于我，我经常上网搜集一些对学习有用的信息，因为我认为我们应该充分利用互联网，以便用更多的知识武装自己。
56．What impresses me most is that our teacher always creates a kind of atmosphere where we can voice our opinions freely.给我印象最深的是，我们老师总是营造一种我们可以自由发表看法的氛围。
57．When it came to the questionanswer period, I couldnt wait to ask him some questions, and he answered them with great interest and patience.当问答时间到来时，我迫不及待地问他一些问题，他带着极大的兴趣和耐心回答它们。
58．Only when you devote yourself to it can you enjoy the real pleasure of learning.只有当你投入的时候，你才能体会到学习的真正乐趣。
59．Concerning my study, the moment I return to school I will ask the teachers or my classmates for help.至于我的学习，我一返校就去找老师或同班同学帮忙。
【话题四：人际关系】
60.Now that we all live under one roof, we should learn how to get along well with each other.既然我们住在同一屋檐下，我们应该学会如何彼此相处。
61．As the old saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed.常言道，患难见真情。
62．Im very sorry to hear that a conflict occurred between you and your mother because of your Internet addiction.非常遗憾听说你因为网瘾和母亲发生了冲突。
63．Although he thought he was helping us with the work, he was actually in the way.尽管他认为是在帮我们，实际上是在碍事。
64．No longer has she kept in touch with us since she went abroad for further education.自从出国留学后，她就不再和我们保持联系了。
65．I wonder why Jenny hasnt written us recently. We should have heard from her by now.我想知道珍妮最近没给我们写信的原因，目前为止我们本应该收到她的来信的。
66．Once a decision has been made, all of us should stick to it.一旦做出决定，我们所有人都要坚持这个决定。
67．It offers us chances to communicate with each other, which can help us exchange our learning and life experience. 它给我们提供彼此交流的机会，这有助于我们交流学习和生活经验。
67．She was quite optimistic and energetic. She brought me a lot of happiness and courage. I learned something precious from her—belief in life.她非常乐观且有活力。她给我带来了许多快乐和勇气。我从她身上学到了一些宝贵的东西——要对生活有信心。
68．If it had not been for Li Hua, I would have failed.要不是李华，我可能就失败了。
69．There is a person who plays an important role in my life, which is beyond my description.有一个人在我生命中起了重要作用，这是我无法用语言描述的。
70．I was unwilling to work with others; instead, I just buried myself in my lessons.我不愿意和别人一起学习，而只愿意埋头于自己的功课之中。
71．I didnt realize the importance of cooperating with others until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior high school.直到高中我被选为班长，我才意识到与别人合作的重要性。
72．Ever since then, I have found that smiling is the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily life.此后，我发现微笑是避免我们日常生活中发生纠纷的最好的办法。
73．What is important is that my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others.重要的是，我良好的交际能力使我与他人维持良好的关系。
74．To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life.为了避免这样的冲突，我们应该彼此友好，这是享有和谐生活的必要条件。
75．It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society.原谅和宽恕也是一种美德，尤其是在这样一个充满竞争和压力的社会。
76．The majority of students believe that interest will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job market.大部分学生相信，兴趣会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
77．As we all know, making friends can help us establish good interpersonal relationships, and build a harmonious society.众所周知，交友有助于我们建立良好的人际关系，也有利于构建和谐社会。
78．Useful as words are, they can also be harmful if applied improperly.尽管话语是有用的，如果运用不恰当，它们也可能是有害的。
79．With your help I made such rapid progress that I won the first place in the Spoken English Competition of the city.在您的帮助下，我取得如此快的进步，以至于我在市英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。
80．As far as Im concerned, to build a good relationship, we should trust each other first.就我个人而言，要建立良好的关系，我们首先应该彼此信任。
81．Just as the saying goes, “One tree doesnt make a forest”， our success is based on cooperating with others.正如谚语所言：“独木难成林”，我们的成功是建立在与他人合作的基础上的。
82．Remember I wont be far away whenever you need any help！记住：无论何时你需要任何帮助，我随叫随到！
【话题五：语言学习】
83.I am sure that the dictionary will be of great benefit to your Chinese learning.我相信这本字典对你的汉语学习将很有益处。
84．You had better set up a Chinese Corner in your class, where you can practise your spoken Chinese.你最好在你们班建立一个汉语角，这样你就可以练习汉语口语。
85．The stronger the motivation is, the more quickly a person will learn a foreign language.一个人的积极性越强，学习外语就越快。
86．To begin with, all the signs and slogans in your class should be written both in Chinese and English, which can create an atmosphere to learn English.首先，宣传标语要用英汉双语，这样可以创造学习英语的氛围。
87．It is universally acknowledged that learning English well will be of great benefit to us all.众所周知，学好英语对我们大家都有益处。
88．There are several tips on how to learn English well. Firstly, you should spare no effort to read interesting English news, which can help you increase your interest in English.有几条学好英语的建议。首先，你应当不遗余力地阅读有趣的英语新闻，这有助于增加你对英语的兴趣。
89．Its because of my effort in class that I managed to get the first place in the English Contest held recently in our school.正是由于我在班上的努力使我在最近学校举办的英语竞赛中获得了第一名。
90．Im Li Hua, a Senior 3 student from Beijing Middle School. Im writing to sign up for the individual oral English training program offered online.我是北京中学高三学生李华。我写信来报名参加英语网站的口语个人培训。
91．I can enlarge my vocabulary as well as learn more about the cultures and customs of Englishspeaking countries by reading works in English.通过阅读英语作品我可以增加词汇量，了解更多说英语国家的风俗文化。
92．When we meet a new word, we should guess its meaning through the context first, instead of looking it up in the dictionary.当我们遇到生词时，我们首先应该通过语境猜测其意思，而不是查词典。
93．Like most other Chinese Senior 3 students, I have learnt English for more than 7 years and Ive learned basic grammar rules and vocabulary.像大多数其他中国高三学生一样，我已学了七年多英语，我已学了基本的语法规则和词汇。
94．They think learning English is one of the demands of modern society and will do good to our future career.他们认为学习英语是现代社会的要求之一，它有益于我们未来的职业生涯。
95．I hold the firm belief that you are bound to succeed as long as you work hard.我坚信只要你努力学习，你一定会成功的。
【话题六：饮食与健康】
96.I think itd be a great idea if you could participate in it, owing to your fancy trying a variety of food.我想如果你能来参加就太好了，根据你的喜好尝试各种各样的食物。
97．I have the confidence that you will deeply experience the culture of Chinese cuisine.我相信你会深刻感受中国饮食文化的魅力。
98．The majority of people take in too much fat and not enough fiber，which does great harm to their health.大多数人摄入太多的脂肪，纤维不够，这对他们的健康很有害。
99．Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fastfood restaurants.世界上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡包更令我高兴的事了。
100．As a matter of fact, it is health that counts.事实上，健康才是最重要的。
101．From the above we can draw a conclusion that a healthy body helps to improve the quality of our life.根据以上情况我们可以得出结论：健康的身体有助于提高我们的生活质量。
102．To keep healthy, there are at least three things we can do every day.要保持身体健康，我们每天至少可做三件事。
103．From my own perspective, we should develop a healthy eating habit to build up our strength. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study.我认为，为了增强体质，我们应该养成健康的饮食习惯。只有这样我们才能有足够的精力学习。
104．It is generally believed that the chief reason for the increase in population in developed countries is not so much the rise in birth rates as the decline in death rates as a result of the improvement in medical care.人们普遍认为，在发达国家，人口增长的主要原因与其说是出生率的上升，还不如说是医疗保健的改善使死亡率下降了。
105．According to a survey, more than half of Chinese students are shortsighted, ranking first in the world.根据一项调查，中国学生半数以上患有近视，位居世界第一。
106．A balanced diet and regular exercise can help us keep healthy both physically and mentally.均衡的饮食和有规律的锻炼能帮助我们保持身心健康。
107．Not only does exercise improve our health but also makes us cheerful and raises our learning efficiency.锻炼不仅能改善我们的健康状况，而且使我们精神愉悦并提高学习效率。
108．With their heavy burden removed, students can keep mental health.除去沉重的负担，学生们才可以保持心理健康。
【话题七：计划与打算】
109.If you do not have any previous appointment on June 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.如果6月1日您事先没有别的预约，我们期盼与您共度美好时光。
110．It will not be long before we meet again.不久之后我们就会再次见面的。
111．I intend to make full use of my holiday, doing something Ive been longing for.我打算充分利用我的假期，做一些我一直渴望做的事情。
112．I will make a 10day tour of America after my graduation from senior high school this summer, which will be a good chance for me to experience American culture and practice my oral English.今年夏天高中毕业后，我将去美国进行为期10天的观光旅游，这将是一次体验美国文化、练习英语口语的好机会。
113．I will go to Shanghai next year in the hope of getting a wellpaid job there.明年我要去上海，希望在那儿找到一份薪资高的工作。
114．So I am determined to meet the challenge.因此，我决定迎接挑战。
115．I have a strong desire to go abroad for further studies.我强烈希望出国深造。
116．I have made up my mind to major in computer science in the future.我已下定决心将来主修计算机科学。
117．I know there is a long way to go before I enter a college. So now I must devote myself to study and try my best to get good grades in all subjects.我知道上大学之前还有很长的路要走，我必须专心于学习努力各科取得好成绩。
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