英语写作怎么提高知乎水平呢（介绍钓鱼的经验英语作文提升英文写作从做好a 5-minute writer开始)
你好，我是爱迪生，一个热爱生活的生活探险家，一个热情的独立英语老师。
怎样用新概念英语进行可理解输入和有效输出，从而提升孩子的听说读写实力？
用数据说话，高考英语阅读到底难在哪？孩子的英语到什么程度才可以超越高考。
提升英文写作从做好a 5-minute writer 开始
英文写作，是很多孩子的痛，一听说要写作文，就头疼。这一点上，和语文的写作文有几分类似。买一本英语作文书，去读就好了吗？显然不是。今天这篇文章和大家分享一下如何提升孩子的英文写作。
1从做一个善于发现美的读者开始
我们在阅读文章的时候，要注意哪些地方写的好。什么叫写的好，这没有标准答案，但我们可以通过文字感受到作者要表达的深厚的感情，作者要描绘的生动的世界，作者要描绘的人物形象。或者，一篇短文里面有什么好的短语和词汇是值得我们学习的。我们要留意，作者如何写人的外貌，写景，写人的心情，写人物的对白。
Leon didn’t notice Edward until he turned to shoot the ball and caught a glimpse of Edward’s bulging backpack. He and his friends, Russ and Tommy, often met for pickup games after school. Leon really loved basketball and was good at it. But Edward was another story.
Notice 注意到
Turned to shoot the ball - 转身射球
Caught a glimpse - 瞥见
Often met for pickup games - 经常集合进行比赛
Loved basketball - 热爱篮球
Good at it - 擅长篮球
Another story - 另一番景象，另一种情况
Still, Leon had trouble turning his brother away. He would look at Edward’s eager face and feel extremely guilty saying no. Edward was his brother, after all. Also, his mother always told him not to exclude his brother.
Had trouble doing 做...有困难
Turning (someone) away - 拒绝某人
Feel guilty - 感到内疚
Eager face - 渴望的脸庞
Exclude (someone) - 排斥某人
“My friends,” Sleeping Beauty said, raising her glass. “Today marks avery special day in our history and an even better day for our future. As ofthis morning, our kingdom’s trading deals, crop production, and overallconsciousness have not only been restored but improved since the sleepingcurse was cast upon this land!”
marks a very special day 标志着一个非常特殊的日子
Raising her glass - 举起杯子
A special day - 特殊的一天
Trading deals - 贸易协议
Crop production - 农作物生产
overallconsciousness 全局意识
Sleeping curse - 睡眠诅咒
而很多童话里面描写，妙不可言。
People hurried through the snowstorm to get into their warm houses, where they celebrated the coming of the New Year. However, by midnight, the snowfall had stopped and an icy chill had fallen on the town, freezing the top of the snow into a hard frosty crust.
人们匆忙穿过暴风雪，进入温暖的房子里庆祝新年的到来。然而，到了午夜，暴雪停止了，一股冷冽的寒气降临在小镇上，将积雪的顶部冻成了坚硬的霜状物
When the sun came up in the morning, colouring the sky and the snow in purple and gold, two sparrows hopped around on a rooftop, trying to keep warm.
当早晨的阳光升起时，为天空和雪地镀上紫色和金色，两只麻雀在屋顶上跳跃着，试图保暖。
“I’ve just about had enough of this cold!” complained one of them. “The humans celebrated the ‘New Year’ last night, but things seem just as miserable as they were yesterday!”
“I agree!” grumbled the other. “When will it be spring?”They were joined by an older and wiser sparrow, whose feathers were turning white.“The humans have invented things called ‘calendars’ that tell them when a year ends and when seasons begin!” said the old sparrow. “But if you truly want to know when the seasons change, you must go to the countryside. Spring truly comes when the storks return!”The two younger sparrows decided to go out into the countryside to find out when spring would come, but the older one chose to stay behind. “My wife and I have a nice nest under the roof of a house, and the owner even puts out bread crusts for us!”
The sparrows stayed in the country for some weeks, huddling for shelter in tree trunks and searching for seeds in the snow, and one day, they noticed that the snow was melting. As a warm breeze blew up from the south, the first stork of the season flew with it, carrying on its back two golden-haired children. When he saw them, Old Man Winter smiled, and faded away in the warm golden light of the sun.
这两只麻雀在乡村待了几个星期，蜷缩在树干处寻找庇护，并在雪地中寻找种子。有一天，它们发现雪开始融化。当暖和的微风从南方吹来时，季节的第一只鹳随之飞来，背上背着两个金发的孩子。当他看到它们时，寒冬老人微笑着，在温暖的金色阳光中消失了。
A chill wind blew across the barren land, and the first snowflakes fell from a grey sky. The sparrows shivered as the cold went through their feathers. One chirped to the other, “When will it be spring?
Like his father, little Cassius loved to be the centre of attention and could talk so quickly that it was hard to keep up! His mother would come home to find dozens of the neighbourhood children on their porch, listening intently as little Cassius told an endless stream of jokes and stories! 这段我们可以看到一个喜欢讲话喜欢得到人们关注的孩子
He knew that to be the greatest, he would need to work hard! Cassius got up extra-early every morning to run and train, ate healthy food and even practiced his moves in the mirrors of the school bathrooms. However, he never used his boxing skills to bully or hurt other people. He wanted to become the best person he could be – as a boxer and as a human being! 没有用到高级词汇，但是这段写的真好。用简单的词刻画生动的人物形象，高手。
学习记叙文（读后续写），孩子们平时要加大故事阅读量，推荐杂志Storytime, Spider, 纽伯瑞获奖小说，牛津树，Usborne出版的童话书，神奇树屋，疯狂的学校，纳尼亚传奇，哈利波特等。
如果一个孩子从未见过美，自然也不知道什么是美；如果一个孩子从未阅读过好作品，那么让孩子的写作具有美感自然很难。2从每天写一句话开始，形成写作仪式感，获得写作成就感幼儿园孩子如果在看RAZ，可以每天抄写4句话开始。这是为了让孩子注意到英文句子的大小写和标点。小学孩子有一定的阅读量以后，可以尝试根据当天发生的事情，写印象最深的一件事，听歌的感受，看的电影，看的书，吃过的一顿美食，去过的一个美丽的地方，和朋友一起做的一件开心的事情........但很多词孩子不会写，怎么办？查词典1 有道词典比如 倾盆大雨Sure enough, by noon the rain was pouring down.It rained cats and dogs that day, and my shirt was wet through.The rain came pelting down.2 有一定词汇量后，查longman和 Oxford learner’s dictionary比如A downpour or a cloudburst is a heavy fall of rain that often starts suddenly.When it is raining very hard you can say that it is pouring. In informal British English you can also say that it is bucketing down or chucking it down. You can also say: The heavens opened.3 ozdic 爱迪生每次写作都会用到的写作词典https://ozdic.com/ADJ.driving, heavy, lashing, pouring, torrential | steady | fine, gentle, light, patchyThe fine rain turned to mist in the early evening. The forecast is for wind and patchy rain.4 纸质版英文写作词典 绝代双骄
侧重点不同牛津词典 一个词给出很多搭配比如 concerned 担心的Be/feel/look/seem/sound +concernedExtremely/fairly/very concerned朗文词典 比如一个enjoy 给出很多同义词EnjoyLoveHave a good/great/wonderful timeLive/whoop it upHave funHave a blastHave the time of your life写完不知道有没有问题怎么办？用工具啊！！！方法1：科大讯飞，据说目前水平是幼儿版的GPT,免费的。但和GPT肯定不能比，虽然我没有见过真正的GPT长啥样。
方法2： Grammar Check ：https://www.grammarcheck.net/editor/输入内容，点击左下角的 Free Check 错误内容会有下划线，点击就可以看到修改。方法3：https://virtualwritingtutor.com/输入内容，点击improve writing方法4：https://www.deepl.com/write输入内容，默认订正语法上的基础问题，这些网站基本上就可以修改；但，但，但，文章结构和用词的精准性，最好还是找GPT或者专业的英语老师，尤其是懂英文写作的。每天坚持在朋友圈分享，就是一个仪式感，爱迪生就是这么做的，很方便。孩子可以自己写在本子上，然后用软件检查，检查完发朋友圈，或者用一个word文档，把每天写的内容记录在里面。在乎写作，就会每天去写。我们每天经历那么多事情，总有一件事是值得书写的。坚持用英文记录生活，我们会慢慢培养自己善于发现美的眼睛，善于捕捉美的心灵。3 从模仿中考高考作文开始选一本有品质的英文写作书，比如爱迪生自己编写的 中学英语写作探险家和中考英语写作探险家（根据苏州近10年中考英语作文编写）根据译林教材的话题，结合高考应用文模式编写，覆盖常见的写作话题。中考英语写作探险家部分内容2022《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practice makes perfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文授稿，内容包括：1你对该词语的理解；2.你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务，学习等方面）；3你的感悟。注意：1词数100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数：2内容露涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥：3文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。Practice makes perfectHave you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect ”It meansthat the more you practice something, the better you will become at it. I strongly believe in this saying and have experienced it firsthand in my life.One example of this is playing the piano. When I first started playing, I struggled to read sheet music and coordinate my fingers. But with consistent practice, I gradually improved and can now play more complex pieces with ease.Through this experience, I learned that practice requires patience and perseverance. Its easy to get frustrated and give up when progress seems slow, but its important to keep going and trust the process. I also learned that practice doesnt make perfect, but it does make progress. Every small improvement is worth celebrating and motivates me to keep practicing.In conclusion, the saying “practice makes perfect” is not just a cliche, but a valuable life lesson. Whether its in sports, music, academics, or any other aspect of life, consistent practice and dedication can lead to great achievements.Practice makes perfect - 练习使人完美Experienced it firsthand - 亲身经历Struggled - 挣扎Coordinate one’s fingers - 协调双手Consistent practice - 持续的练习Gradually improved - 逐渐提高Playing skills - 演奏技巧Patience and perseverance - 耐心与毅力Frustrated - 沮丧Give up - 放弃Trust the process - 相信过程Make progress - 取得进步Small improvement - 小小的进步Worth celebrating - 值得庆祝Motivates - 激励Valuable life lesson - 宝贵人生经验Consistent dedication - 持续的献身Great achievements - 辉煌成就Any other aspect of life - 生活的其他方面Proficient in - 熟练掌握中学英语写作探险家部分内容说明文：介绍家乡，包含地理位置，特色景点，特色美食，欢迎大家来做客。以常熟为例，写一篇100字左右的英文作文。Changshu, my hometown, located in Jiangsu province, has become a famous tourist attraction.Firstly, Changshu has a variety of scenic spots, such as Yushan Mountain, Shanghu Lake. Yushan Mountain is famous for its beautiful scenery and is a great destination for hiking enthusiasts. Shanghu Lake is known for its clear water and fresh air, making it a great place for leisurely boat rides and fishing.Furthermore, Changshu is famous for its delicious local food, such as seafood, dumplings. Fresh seafood, including shrimp and fish, is a must-try dish for visitors. The dumplings, filled with pork, bamboo shoots, and other ingredients, are another local specialty.Therefore, I welcome you all to come and visit my hometown, Changshu, to enjoy its beautiful scenery, taste its delicious food, and experience its rich history and culture.我的家乡常熟位于江苏省，已成为著名的旅游胜地。首先，常熟有各种风景名胜，如虞山 尚湖。虞山以其美丽的风景闻名，是徒步旅行爱好者的理想目的地。尚湖以清澈的水和新鲜的空气闻名，是休闲划船和钓鱼的好去处。此外，常熟还以其美食闻名，如海鲜、饺子等。新鲜的海鲜，包括虾和鱼等，是游客必尝的美食。馅料包括猪肉、竹笋和其他食材的饺子是另一种当地特色。因此，我欢迎大家来参观我的家乡常熟，欣赏其美丽的风景，品尝其美味的食物，并体验其丰富的历史和文化。1)Changshu has a variety of scenic spots.2)常熟有各种风景名胜。3)Yushan Mountain is famous for its beautiful scenery.4)虞山以其美丽的风景闻名。5)Shanghu Lake is known for its clear water and fresh air.6)尚湖以清澈的水和新鲜的空气闻名。7)Fresh seafood, including shrimp and fish, is a must-try dish for visitors.8)新鲜的海鲜，包括虾和鱼等，是游客必尝的美食。9)Dumplings filled with pork, bamboo shoots, and other ingredients, are another local specialty.10)馅料包括猪肉、竹笋和其他食材的饺子是另一种当地特色。11)Changshu is famous for its delicious local food.12)常熟以其美食闻名。13)Yushan Mountain is a great destination for hiking enthusiasts.14)虞山是徒步旅行爱好者的理想目的地。15)Shanghu Lake is a great place for leisurely boat rides and fishing.16)尚湖是休闲划船和钓鱼的好去处。17)I welcome you all to come and visit my hometown, Changshu.18)我欢迎大家来参观我的家乡常熟。19)Come and experience its rich history and culture.20)来体验它丰富的历史和文化吧。高考10年真题的读后续写和应用文，爱迪生预计在9月开始编写。此刻正忙着编写新概念英语2阅读练习册 适合初中学霸或高中生使用比如Last week, I had the opportunity to attend a theatre performance. As a regular theatre-goer, I was thrilled to get a good seat and was looking forward to enjoying the play.However, my enthusiasm was short-lived. A young couple behind me were talking loudly, completely oblivious to their surroundings. Despite my best efforts to ignore them, their incessant chatter was ruining my experience.Eventually, I had had enough. Turning around, I glared at them and asked in an annoyed tone, “Could you please keep it down? I can’t hear the actors.” However, the couple responded rudely, stating that it was a private conversation and none of my business.This behavior is unacceptable in a public space, especially during a performance. The theatre is a place where people gather to appreciate and enjoy the arts, and everyone should respect each other’s right to enjoy the show.From this experience, I have learned that theatre-goers must exhibit proper etiquette, including refraining from talking during the performance, silencing mobile phones, and avoiding any behavior that may disturb others.In conclusion, theatre etiquette is a vital aspect of attending performances. As theatre-goers, we must be mindful of others and the impact our actions can have on their experience. Let us remember that the theatre is a shared space for everyone to appreciate the arts in peace.Vocabulary:Theatre performance - 演出Regular theatre-goer - 常去剧院的观众Thrilled - 兴奋的Incessant chatter - 不停的聊天声Ignore - 忽视Inevitably - 不可避免地Glared - 怒视Annoyed - 生气的Unacceptable - 不可接受的Public space - 公共场所Appreciate - 欣赏Respect - 尊重Right - 权利Refrain - 克制Silencing mobile phones - 手机静音Avoid - 避免Disturb - 扰乱Vital - 至关重要的Mindful - 注意的Shared space - 共享的空间What is the main idea of the article?a. The importance of attending theatre performances.b. The benefits of proper theatre etiquette.c. The negative impact of disruptive behavior during a theatre performance.d. The experience of attending a recent theatre performance.What does the word “oblivious” mean in the context of the article?a. Unawareb. Interestedc. Excitedd. HappyWhat was the author’s reaction to the couple’s disruptive behavior?a. They tried to ignore them.b. They joined in on the conversation.c. They spoke to an usher.d. They spoke to the couple.What is the author’s view on proper theatre etiquette?a. It is not important.b. It is important only during certain performances.c. It is important and necessary for all theatre performances.d. It is important, but not necessary for all theatre performances.4 系统学习英文写作免费的：B站 刘美君教授 英文写作有诀窍免费的：自己看书 可以买爱迪生的上面提到的两本，可以买孙老师的 新高考英语写作王中王 和用TEAM框架突破高考英语读后续写；龚露老师的高中英语写作。其中，爱迪生的书适合初中生高中生学习；孙老师，TEAM，龚老师的适合高中生。免费的：美国大学英语写作 全英文，对孩子的阅读有一点要求。（高中生学霸）付费的：爱迪生的课程啊学习爬的启蒙班：适合零基础的1-3年级孩子学习走路的新概念系列：适合小学到初中的孩子学习奔跑的写作探险家：适合能看懂RAZ N级别以上 或中考英语题阅读部分拿到满分或高中生跟一个每天都在坚持用英文写作的老师学，英文写作会轻松的多。爱迪生有自知之明，英文写作不算我的长处，但我自己在英文写作中遇到的挑战，我在英文写作里获得的进步，可以给孩子的英文写作做一个参考。英文写作，如同汉语写作一样，不仅仅需要我们做一个有心的读者，还需要我们做一个写作探险家。既要在阅读中汲取写作的养分，在生活中汲取写作的养分，又要通过我们自己的写作来锻炼自己的英文写作。看一百篇优秀作文，不如自己好好练一篇。在每天的英文写作里，我们会遇到生词，遇到不知道怎样合理的去表达自己，挑战就是我们主动学习和提升自己的机会。所有伟大的故事和旅程都有一个微不足道的开始，爱迪生在NPR上看了很多名人的obituaries, 发现很多演员和歌手都经历过不被认可的阶段，但他们真心热爱表演和音乐，在艺术方面有自己的坚持和付出。英文写作，爱迪生首先是一个学习者，和你一样，我每天都在探索，都在通过自身的行动去实践去学习。学习，遇见更好的自己；写作，让世界听见你的声音。这是爱迪生激励自己的话，也送给每一个你。写作，不管是中文，还是英文，都可以让一个普通人的声音，传递到祖国各地。因为写作，我遇见了每一个你；因为写作，你们认识了爱迪生。20230608Writing has had a significant impact on my life. Firstly, it allows me to express my thoughts and ideas through essays on my blog, without the need to communicate face to face. In other words, I can share my views without worrying about choosing the right words or offending someone. This is especially beneficial when in a group setting, as I tend to be more reserved, whereas others may be more outgoing.Moreover, writing has opened doors to new friends and expanded my social circle. While my real-life connections are limited, writing on the Internet has enabled me to connect with like-minded individuals globally. Some of them have even become close friends over time.Lastly, writing has provided me with a platform to be heard. As a writer, I am able to reach thousands of readers with whom I can share my experiences and insights. Whether it’s helping someone learn English or inspiring someone to follow their dreams and live a positive life, my writing allows me to make a positive impact on the lives of others.While I might not be a professional writer with exceptional talent and imagination, my wish is for my writing to capture the essence of life and help others find their way. Ultimately, my goal is to create more meaningful connections through the words that I write.我是爱迪生，一个热爱大自然的生活探险家，一个喜欢贝多芬和许巍的音乐迷，一个喜欢文学的阅读者，一个不断进行自我提升的独立英语老师。感谢每一个你的阅读，感谢你来爱迪生的理想世界做客。我一直坚信：学习是为了遇见更好的自我。Dream big. Take risks.心在哪，力量就在哪。热爱生命，全力以赴。生命重在参与，在于探索最大的可能性。爱迪生精心整理的原版英文听力资源，大家根据自己的需求去探索。公众号：爱迪生的理想世界B站：在唐朝教英语的爱迪生喜马拉雅：纽伯瑞原版英语爱迪生网易云音乐：纽伯瑞EdisonVX：pursuer1986DY：67345152目前爱迪生开设的在线班，大家根据孩子实际情况对号入座：周四晚启蒙班7.00-8.30 1-2年级零基础孩子，以分级阅读，动画输入为主，抄写句子和仿写句子为辅。周日下午新概念英语1 下午2.00-3.30 4-6年级，有一定阅读基础，但语法和英文写作不太好的孩子。周六晚上写作探险家 晚上7.00-8.30 年龄不限，有至少有章节书或中考阅读底子，但英文写作需要系统学习的孩子。以上课程，都需要进行测评入学，具体情况，欢迎感兴趣的家长微信和我沟通。短期课：音标课 12次学会朗读词典上任意单词，会空气书写法中考真题探险家 12次学会阅读技巧和中考常见的写作高考真题探险家 12次学会阅读技巧和读后续写基本原理这是爱迪生编写的部分学习资料，需要购买的朋友微信联系。